[DMP_Jay]

The link is HERE

it's free, and you don't have to download anything.

give it a read, I scripted the first story and wrote the last story.

leave a comment or something either here or on the site.

[DMP_Jay]

Don't all respond at once...

[ZombieHugger]

It was pretty good. The only comment (and hopefully it'll be taken as constructive criticism) is that the part at the beginning with the man who shoots his wife and himself felt like a different style than the rest of it, and it kind of threw me off. I *almost* stopped reading because of it, but I was glad I continued on. Past that point, it's amazing!

[DMP_Jay]

ZombieHugger, on 19 June 2012 - 07:58 PM, said:

It was pretty good. The only comment (and hopefully it'll be taken as constructive criticism) is that the part at the beginning with the man who shoots his wife and himself felt like a different style than the rest of it, and it kind of threw me off. I *almost* stopped reading because of it, but I was glad I continued on. Past that point, it's amazing!

thanks glad you liked the book overall.

i handled only the script for the first story, i felt obligated to have that start the book since the guy who drew and wrote the plot to the story was the one who had the idea to do the book. granted that had probably turned many people off, i felt that the other stories would more than make up for it.


jay