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JFAK075
10-15-2004, 05:16 PM
Well, here is Dead End, chapter three! The halfway point in my short story.
There is no turning back now. I can safely say, that this is the most violent and gory chapter ever shot for a diorama-story. Now sit-back, enjoy . . . and get down with the sickness!
Need I mention this is not intended for children?
Can't wait to hear what you think.
http://www.keenanscustomsandmore.net/deadend.htm
-John
FatherJack
10-18-2004, 04:37 PM
Awesome! You need to keep this thing going past Halloween. :evil:
JFAK075
10-18-2004, 04:47 PM
FatherJack,
Man, you just made my day. not an hour ago I was bitchin' to my wife about how no one raplied to Chapter three. I was very dissapointed. Anyway, thanks!
-John
PS- Who knows, I may do another one next year.
Redstar
10-18-2004, 05:07 PM
Very entertaining stuff! Well done...makes me all misty-eyed for my old Joes :-( . Can't wait for the finale!
JFAK075
10-19-2004, 08:03 PM
Redstar,
Glad you like Dead End so far. You also get the no-prize for being the first person to say they can't wait for the story to end! :lol:
ZombieMannXIII
10-19-2004, 08:48 PM
Just read Dead End chp 3 today. It was great.

Awesome idea to use GI Joes and mix them with zombies. I like how you throw in the gore too.

The head squash was classic.
JFAK075
10-20-2004, 08:01 PM
ZombieMannXIII,
Glad you're still diggin' the story. As far as The head squash goes, it actually was written as a head-kick. But I thought the squash effect would work better.
Later- John
dudethatlikeszombies
10-20-2004, 10:15 PM
dude that so reminds me of a show i use to watch, when i was little. It was on Nickelodeon ( spelling ). KABLAM! that's it! yeah it reminded me of KABLAM, except with zombies. that was really cool. that would make a great movie, kinda like Team America: World Police.
StompinCharlie
10-21-2004, 10:39 AM
can you post all chapters leading up to number 3? Thanks in advance.
StompinCharlie
10-21-2004, 10:45 AM
Nevermind :D
JFAK075
10-21-2004, 11:30 AM
StompinCharlie,
let me know what you think of the story so far. I'm dying to know (Couldn't resist).
-John
StompinCharlie
10-22-2004, 10:51 AM
I acctually love it and it reminds me of KABLAM so much. I was looking for a cameo of Stinky Diver, but to no avail. Keep up the great work, and I'm really looking forward to the rest of the series.