Story idea

[buttlock]

Right, so i was thinking a good idea would be to tell the tale from an immigrants perspective. A group of mexicans s trying to get through border security and during the confusion of all of the people trying to get through, zed attack the mobscene. They get saved by a group of border guards who delibratley dis-obey orders when told to open fire on anyone who tries to get through. They book out of there and thats as far as i have goten.

[Eknytz]

lol, unique perspective.

[ico]

It's pretty bare dude, anybody here could come up with something equally as basic as that. And as far as advancing the story, i personally wouldnt want to follow a bunch of mexicans around.

Have a zombie movie set in/start off in a big ass highschool thats completely fenced off, except of course for the path exits and carpark exits. I for one would like to see some Battle Royal style highschool killings. Aw yeah.

[buttlock]

zombies overrun Columbine highschool during the shootings........ok that might go a little to far.

[Zombie Survivor]

It's a unique perspective, however, make sure that you don't fall into clichés too easily. Create original circumstances and plot twists if that's possible. Also, make you're zombies something special, not the usual Romero-type zombies. That way, people will remember your story better. And last but not least, don't skipp on the gore and detailed descriptions :evil:

[Z Killa]

Ok, You got a good start there, but where is it going?
When you think of a story first start off w/ a general overview. Have the end in mind before you start putting pen to paper. Then fill in w/ details. Alot of writers forget this somple fact, and before long the details don't fit their intended ending.
Also, characters. Otherwise you're looking at a documentary. Who's the main character? One of the immigrants or a Border Patrol officer? Who's supporting? What are your sub-plots?
Figure this stuff out and get back to us.

[Iron Knuckles]

Maybe I sound like a racist but I'm really not.
I dont want to read a story about a group of illegals. I have enough of them in my life already and I freacking hate it.

[AN OLD SHOE]

i would watch it

[ethacron]

zombies overrun Columbine highschool during the shootings........ok that might go a little to far.

no way man freedom of speech, nothing can go too far as long as you say it cant, espessaly if your writeing it,**** what everyone elce thinks......anyway i think the border story might work